I'm going to have to disagree and say this is easily one of the best films of the year. Are there the occasional misstep or bizarre decision? Yes. But there are also moments that are among the best American cinema has seen in years. It is these shining moments that if anything shows Jones to have grown into a much more assured director since
Three Burials, even if the whole doesn't always follow suit. Whatever TLJ does next – and I sincerely hope its thud of a release doesn't prevent him from making another Western – I think there's the potential for something truly special.
Now onto your criticisms:
I don't find Hillary Swank's narratives arc baffling nor dissonant. If anything it strikes me as terribly inevitable and anticipated by much of the film.
Yes, she's a surprisingly independent and strong woman... But she still a woman, a pioneer woman. The whole purpose of the homestead is just that: to build a home. She's also hardly some wild mountain woman. If she is cultured, it is only because she is from the East, and she still clearly pines for the domesticity which she left behind. The juxtaposition of the opening scenes make this clear: Swank out in the field doing harsh unforgiving farm work as well as any man (better perhaps given Jones later story). Then her standing in front of a mirror, trying to call forth some beauty in a landscape that has absolutely no need for it. Even before her rejection, even before her mock-piano playing, all the ingredients are there for a nervous breakdown.
To me, the rejection of her as "plain" as nothing to do with her looks. This isn't only because of the Betsy Blair casting of an attractive woman as a "dog". I think the double-meaning is clear: it's her very self-sufficiency, her "uncommon life" that marks her as unmarriable. It's why the men may be shamed, but they leave her to the journey just the same: in the fabric of the community, an old spinster is expendable. It's all too easy for us to respond to such sentiments with "fuck 'em", but it's clearly a double-edged burden to Swank's character.
Also, while the film is clearly playing with radical and feminist material, it's far too simplistic to boil the film down as anti-domesticity. Only the Svenson husband is shown as truly abusive. Jesse Plemons is portrayed as a doting husband, albeit one that simply cannot understand his wife's madness. And while William Fichtner's character's character is called into question, there's no evidence of him being abusive to his family. Rather it is the starvation conditions of their farm that drives the Sours woman to infanticide. The common denominator isn't simply married-life but the conditions, brutal and unforgiving, of pioneer life. The conflict of trying to put a square peg (domesticity) into a round hole (wilderness). One could extricate a feminist reading from this, but it hardly provides the limit.
It occurs to me now that what separates Cuddy from the rest of the women isn't just independence of spirit, but also independence of means. She clearly has a certain amount of economic privilege that the others don't. As such her narrative arc within this "road film" is coming face-to-face with the very harsh conditions of life that the other women have had to live with every single day. It's no coincidence that the pivotal scene for her is one in which she too experiences the same freezing, starvation condition that broke the other women. Everything from this point forward fall is a logical progression to madness. We return to the earlier piano playing and in this new context it strikes us as symptomatic of neurosis. That she falls into the arms of someone who had potentially left for dead to me only underlies, not undermines, a feminist reading. Faced with the senseless harshness of frontier life she grasps, desperation disguised as pragmatism, for meaning. And as a woman, in that period, rightly or wrongly, the only meaning she can create is that of family, marriage. When that fails, so does she.
Expecting her to be Andrea Dworkin with a six-shooter strikes me as wholly unreasonable. Even a strong woman can succumb to loneliness or the weight of societal expectations.
I'll have to get back to the Fairfield Hotel hotel scene, partly because I'm out of time, partly because I need to mull it over. But I will say this:
1) There's no way around it, it is mass murder, it is excessive. Even the arguments in favor of Gibb's actions – that by sending them away, the hotel was essentially sentencing them to death; that if he simply stole the food, it was filled with skilled gunmen who could easily hunt him and the women down – doesn't mitigate the barbarity of the act. You're right. Morality and justice doesn't figure into it. It's something that Gibb's felt needed to be done, so he did it. It is an amoral act, point blank, as amoral and senseless as the landscape surrounding them. It's not good or moral, it just is. However, I have no doubt that Jones meant it to be as divisive and incongruent a scene as it reads. I might not know what to think of the scene, but I have no doubt that it's worth thinking over.
2) It's hard not to read the scene in light of the rest of the film. For all I write above about the harshness or brutality of the Western landscape, this doesn't strike me as an anti-Western, an endless dirge about how violent and unsparing the West is. It doesn't treat such proclamations as revelations, but as a given. And like all givens, it's something that can be contradicted. Rather, the main subject seems to be the uneasy, perhaps irreconcilable relationship between harsh, frontier life and the encroaching "cosmopolitan" settled world. The film's final scenes strike me as concerned with class as much as gender. The juxtaposition between the bookends is hard to miss. Mary Bee Cuddy trying desperately to maintain the semblance of domestic life in the hard farm country, and for her trouble falling into a hard job meant for a man. George Briggs trying to fit into city life in Iowa and, despite still being essentially on the edge of the frontier, being treated anathema wherever he goes.
It's bitter, unsentimental and not always easy to digest, but god I hope more people see this before it's gone from theaters (and it's going).